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  • As our biologists introduced in the first part ,the plant is just a carrier, in the future we plan to optimize the chip, one can adapt more carriers, after all, the vitality of plants are not forever, and it influenced by the external environment , improvement of the carrier to reflect our product will answer our responsability to the society .
  • On the other hand we will expand the scope so that our product can detect the others disease ,such as diabetes.

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    • As our biologists introduced in the first part ,the plant is just a carrier, in the future we plan to optimize the chip, one can adapt more carriers, after all, the vitality of plants are not forever, and it influenced by the external environment , improvement of the carrier to reflect our product will answer our responsability to the society .
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