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music is my best friend
Hello ) I speak and write on English terrible, but i want correct it.) Now I listen music, in player Pink – Just Give Me A Reason.
It happened that music my only friend,except my extremely cat.
Only with them I feel myself such as I am.
Music in my headphones always: when i smile^ ^, when i need in motivation, when i doing sports, when i walk and when i work.
But especially when my mind with man when as far from me.

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- Hello ) I speak and write on English terrible, but i want correct it.) Now I listen music, in player Pink – Just Give Me A Reason.
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- It happened that music my only friend,except my extremely cat.
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- Only with them I feel myself such as I am.
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- Music in my headphones always: when i smile^ ^, when i need in motivation, when i doing sports, when i walk and when i work.
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- But especially when my mind with man when as far from me.
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