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Hello, I am Vahlii and I would like to be hired in your factory.
I think my main assets are that I'm at ease with the brand new softwares, I'm dynamic and hardworking.
If you think I'm too young, know that I'm older than you can suppose.
If you think a girl can't work in your company, know that your main competitor will hire me and they will do the best choice.
So, if you're interested in my application, please contact me on my cell phone ********** or by post.
Your sincerely, Me !
(I don't want to say my real name)

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문장 1
- Hello, I am Vahlii and I would like to be hired in your factory.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I think my main assets are that I'm at ease with the brand new softwares, I'm dynamic and hardworking.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- If you think I'm too young, know that I'm older than you can suppose.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- If you think a girl can't work in your company, know that your main competitor will hire me and they will do the best choice.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- So, if you're interested in my application, please contact me on my cell phone ********** or by post.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Your sincerely, Me !
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- (I don't want to say my real name)
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7