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  • How can ? you enjoy at weekend

  • My working days are very busy I always work under pressure and I start to work from Monday to Friday also my holiday , Saturday is a nice day because I don’t go to work then in the morning I often get up at 8:00 am after I do morning exercise then I wash my face , brush my teeth and have breakfast beside I drink a cup of tea .
  • I feel comfortable and relaxed sometimes my friend and I go to cinema in the afternoon we watch a scientific film which is one of the most stringking ones at the present time after that we go to shopping for shirts, shoes and bags .
  • In the evening, I come back home and I have dinner with my family after dinner , I listen to music and play games.
  • I really like Saturday because I feel more relaxed than I do on the other week days.
  • As a result I try to enjoy every moment of the day it is a good way to maintain my relationship and keep in touch with everybody around me.

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    • My working days are very busy I always work under pressure and I start to work from Monday to Friday also my holiday , Saturday is a nice day because I don’t go to work then in the morning I often get up at 8:00 am after I do morning exercise then I wash my face , brush my teeth and have breakfast beside I drink a cup of tea .
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    • I feel comfortable and relaxed sometimes my friend and I go to cinema in the afternoon we watch a scientific film which is one of the most stringking ones at the present time after that we go to shopping for shirts, shoes and bags .
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    • As a result I try to enjoy every moment of the day it is a good way to maintain my relationship and keep in touch with everybody around me.
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