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hello!
Hello!
My name is Oleg.
I`m from Russia. I`m 24 years.
I`m work is engineer.
I study English 3 Month.
In school I learnt German.
I needed English for travel another country.
I want to speak with another people for improve skills language.
Please correct my message, if has mistake.
If has people wishing mutually study language (russian-english), please write in PM.

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- Hello!
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- My name is Oleg.
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- I`m from Russia. I`m 24 years.
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- I`m work is engineer.
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- I study English 3 Month.
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- I needed English for travel another country.
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- I want to speak with another people for improve skills language.
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