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Thomas Alva Edison
Famous american inventor and employed.
Edison got in the U.S. thousand patents and about three thousand patents in the other countries.
He improved telegraph, telephone, cinematographic equipment.
He constructed electric lamp.
It was who suggested the use of a telephone conversation at the beggining of the word " Hello"

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- Famous american inventor and employed.
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- Edison got in the U.S. thousand patents and about three thousand patents in the other countries.
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- He improved telegraph, telephone, cinematographic equipment.
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- He constructed electric lamp.
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- It was who suggested the use of a telephone conversation at the beggining of the word " Hello"
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