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Detroit
I know it is a very difficult Topic.
But i watching very often foreign Reports about whats going on in the whole world.
So one common evening i saw a Report about Detroit and his Downfall.
If the Information are true, more than 75 Skyscraper are completeley empty and getting slowly to a so called ghosttown.
The Report ended after an hour and i was shocked.
How could it be possible that such a known all over the world City has been collapsed or is still being collapse ?
How sad is that, poor inhabitans of Detroit dont give up.

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- I know it is a very difficult Topic.
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- But i watching very often foreign Reports about whats going on in the whole world.
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- So one common evening i saw a Report about Detroit and his Downfall.
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- If the Information are true, more than 75 Skyscraper are completeley empty and getting slowly to a so called ghosttown.
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- The Report ended after an hour and i was shocked.
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- How could it be possible that such a known all over the world City has been collapsed or is still being collapse ?
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- How sad is that, poor inhabitans of Detroit dont give up.
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