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hi
Hi I'm from Turkey.
I want to improve my english and ı want to learn İtalian.Do you have someone to help?

sweetdFebruary 2014100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- hi
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi I'm from Turkey.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I want to improve my english and ı want to learn İtalian.Do you have someone to help?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2