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My name is Wellington, I'm 17 years old and since I was 13 I'm learning English on my own, I like science, games, technology and the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, I'm reading the fourth book So long, and Thanks for All the Fish.

I want to go abroad study english but flight tickets in Brazil are extremely expensive, if you are rich and want to impress someone just say that you paid $1360 dollars in your iPhone 5s 32GB or $1700 dollars in your PS4, things here are really cheap, right?

Unfortunately I don't have a PS4 (and if you are mentally sane you probably won't pay this huge amount of money for a PS4) as I said before here is a expensive country and if you want to come to Brazil to watch the World Cup, I think it's about time to break your piggy bank because everything is getting expensive here, I remember when I was a little Wellington and with R $1.00 I (one Real) could buy a lot of candy and now it's almost impossible.

That's all Folks!