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Text from Cesario2nd - English

  • Memo to all Staff Part 2

  • Topic of Memo inferior quality.
  • Last week after the exihibition in Melbourne i met Mr.ginger from JI department Store from Australia.
  • He was a former Customer of our Company an in the past he was critical most of the time.
  • However i persuaded after a small talk Mr.ginger to get our Service once again.
  • For that reason it is absoluteley necessary to stay on course.
  • We should use our energy to do it much bether than in the Past.
  • Mr.ginger is very interested in womens and children shoes and Trainers.
  • In the Past the Problem was the inferior Quality of each supplier.
  • Now i will arrange a Meeting with Mr. ginger in our store and you should prepare the Display of all shoes he does want to see.
  • The very best Location to present is the 3rd.
  • Floor behind the cash box.
  • Take care that the flowers have a secure Position.
  • Last but not least don´t stock any longer shoes from These supplier.
  • Please do it at your very best, it´s not a secret every customer count´s.
  • Mr. Johnson Office 4

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