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My favourite pet
I have got a pet. It is a cat.
Her name is Dzhina.
She is 15 years old.
She lives in the house.
She is grey and fluffy .
She's got white paws, long tail.
Her eyes are big and yellow.
Dzhina is very nice, smart and funny.
But it is very, very aggressive (my cat from hell).
It bites and rushes on strangers.
She likes to eat meat, sausage, ham.

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- My favourite pet
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- I have got a pet. It is a cat.
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- Her name is Dzhina.
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- She is 15 years old.
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- She lives in the house.
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- She is grey and fluffy .
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- She's got white paws, long tail.
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- Her eyes are big and yellow.
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- Dzhina is very nice, smart and funny.
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- But it is very, very aggressive (my cat from hell).
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- It bites and rushes on strangers.
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- She likes to eat meat, sausage, ham.
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