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English and me
For introduce myself, I'm 24 years old and I live in Paris.
I am pretty bad in english and I really want to improve myself.
That's why I write this little text.
Currently I prepare an exam with an english test.
I have studied a lot the other disciplines, and I really hope not fail because of english.
I any case, I'm really upset to not be able to speak in english (or write...), particularly during traveling.
I hope writing texts like that will help me to improve my english.

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- English and me
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문장 1
- For introduce myself, I'm 24 years old and I live in Paris.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I am pretty bad in english and I really want to improve myself.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- That's why I write this little text.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Currently I prepare an exam with an english test.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- I have studied a lot the other disciplines, and I really hope not fail because of english.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- I any case, I'm really upset to not be able to speak in english (or write...), particularly during traveling.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- I hope writing texts like that will help me to improve my english.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7