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  • The author starts with her experience with her husband in valentine’s day.
  • She said that all tv series has as an ingredient of the history the divorce.
  • Also, the author mention that the probability of get divorce in USA increased in 50 percent and this number surprise the author because this country has one of the fabulous valentine’s day in the world.
  • In the divorce, the author’s facts mention that the woman is the most affected in a divorce because always she is the only one who confronts the economic responsibility in the single family.
  • However divorce was the cornerstone of the liberty of women.
  • The case of Henry VIII of England was the famous one case of divorce in the world’s history.
  • The argue for his divorce was between him and the pope to annulate his marriage since his wife was unable to give him a heir.
  • But after 3 years of conflict the king has his divorce and remarried with Anna, a prettiest woman than the last one.
  • The resistance to the divorce in England was so strong that the only way to made it real was the creation of a law in favor of that.
  • Then appeared 324 cases of divorce yn the country were just 4 cases was brought by women.
  • The process of divorce was very hard and difficult for the couple.
  • For example, the author mention two, the one of the king Henry VIII an the case of Castlehaven were the dead was the last and definitely way to end the process and in both cases with the dead of one of them, in the first Anna, accused to be guilty of the dead of a judge and the earl accused by sodomy and other worst things like that.
  • In the times when the divorce started the reason was the infidelity but women should gave more reasons to get divorced and be examined too.
  • That was unfair but in those times the idiosyncrasy was different.
  • In my opinion divorce y a good way to be happy because people should decide when the problem ends and becomes the life again.
  • Unfortunately here in our country this was implemented just some years ago and that’s unfair for woman because they was obligated indirectly to be with a man until the end of their life instead the man were a bad father and husband.
  • Actually, in the last years divorce had been more fast and better for couples.
  • But sometimes this way could be seen in a bad meaning and abuse of that and then affect child in family.
  • That’s why I think that divorce should be the last solution and should be taken with responsibility too.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Also, the author mention that the probability of get divorce in USA increased in 50 percent and this number surprise the author because this country has one of the fabulous valentine’s day in the world.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
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    • In the divorce, the author’s facts mention that the woman is the most affected in a divorce because always she is the only one who confronts the economic responsibility in the single family.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
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    • The argue for his divorce was between him and the pope to annulate his marriage since his wife was unable to give him a heir.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
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    • But after 3 years of conflict the king has his divorce and remarried with Anna, a prettiest woman than the last one.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
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    • The resistance to the divorce in England was so strong that the only way to made it real was the creation of a law in favor of that.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
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    • For example, the author mention two, the one of the king Henry VIII an the case of Castlehaven were the dead was the last and definitely way to end the process and in both cases with the dead of one of them, in the first Anna, accused to be guilty of the dead of a judge and the earl accused by sodomy and other worst things like that.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
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    • In the times when the divorce started the reason was the infidelity but women should gave more reasons to get divorced and be examined too.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
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    • In my opinion divorce y a good way to be happy because people should decide when the problem ends and becomes the life again.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
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    • Unfortunately here in our country this was implemented just some years ago and that’s unfair for woman because they was obligated indirectly to be with a man until the end of their life instead the man were a bad father and husband.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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