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  • Becoming a world traveler

  • How does a man become a world traveler?
  • Watching documentaries and other sience and entertainment programs I am always jelaous.
  • I what to be that guy or that girl that runs with a herd of wild horses, that swims in a bluest lake, jumps from a top of mountain or discovers the meaning of some ancient script while digging in an old temple ruins in Brazil.
  • To be free, to explore, to meet new people and animals, to see the world and not to worry about anything else then a new adventure, it is my dream.
  • And I always wonder if it will come true one day.
  • But my time is running out, I am thirty years old and still have not cross the borders of my country.
  • And yes, there is a lot of beautiful things to see in my Land as well as in others, but I did not manage to do that either.
  • I guess there is some reason for me being stuck in this little town for the moment and one day I hope to find out what is like to be a world traveler.

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    • I what to be that guy or that girl that runs with a herd of wild horses, that swims in a bluest lake, jumps from a top of mountain or discovers the meaning of some ancient script while digging in an old temple ruins in Brazil.
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    • To be free, to explore, to meet new people and animals, to see the world and not to worry about anything else then a new adventure, it is my dream.
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    • And yes, there is a lot of beautiful things to see in my Land as well as in others, but I did not manage to do that either.
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    • I guess there is some reason for me being stuck in this little town for the moment and one day I hope to find out what is like to be a world traveler.
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