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mi first post
Hi everybody.
I discover this page a few days ago and I thought it is a great idea to use it to improve my english.
I'm studing your language because i want to aim a B2 (FCE) certificate and to pass this exam I need to write correctly.
Now, in my country, we are realising of english's importance because working stuff have changed a lot in a very few time.
Now is quite imposible to get a job if you can't speak and write english fluidly .
So, here I am....
I hope the results of this experience will be as great as I thought.
I'm waiting impatiently for my first correction. Thanks to all

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- Hi everybody.
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- I discover this page a few days ago and I thought it is a great idea to use it to improve my english.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- I'm studing your language because i want to aim a B2 (FCE) certificate and to pass this exam I need to write correctly.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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- Now, in my country, we are realising of english's importance because working stuff have changed a lot in a very few time.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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- Now is quite imposible to get a job if you can't speak and write english fluidly .
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- So, here I am....
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- I hope the results of this experience will be as great as I thought.
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- I'm waiting impatiently for my first correction. Thanks to all
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8