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Help me!
Hello,members of Poliglotclub!
I tryed to find a pen-friend, but nobody answered me.
Well, I'll write here.
I like to travel.Last autumn I and my daugther were visiting Barcelona and Paris on one's own account.
When Helena left me, I felt a horror, becouse my English was bad.
Now I am learning English myself.
I want to travel without language problems.I'll wait your connection.Thank you.

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- I tryed to find a pen-friend, but nobody answered me.
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- I like to travel.Last autumn I and my daugther were visiting Barcelona and Paris on one's own account.
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- When Helena left me, I felt a horror, becouse my English was bad.
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- Now I am learning English myself.
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- I want to travel without language problems.I'll wait your connection.Thank you.
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