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love gold coast
I just come back from gold coast yesterday.
The beach and sunset are beautiful there.
I went to three theme parks and I love the wet n wild most because the water activities are really exciting.
One funny thing is that I went into a activity looks like ghost house, so I thought: hmmmm, maybe it's fine for me since I don't really scared of "ghost".
But the thing is, it was a ghost house, but, which contains two parts.
The first parts was sort of scared things but the second parts was roller coaster which I am so scared of.
So the rest of the activity the only thing I did was screaming :P.

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- I just come back from gold coast yesterday.
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- The beach and sunset are beautiful there.
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- I went to three theme parks and I love the wet n wild most because the water activities are really exciting.
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- One funny thing is that I went into a activity looks like ghost house, so I thought: hmmmm, maybe it's fine for me since I don't really scared of "ghost".
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- But the thing is, it was a ghost house, but, which contains two parts.
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- The first parts was sort of scared things but the second parts was roller coaster which I am so scared of.
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- So the rest of the activity the only thing I did was screaming :P.
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