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January 23th
Today is wednesday, January 23th.
Today I went to school, Today had a good news, My girlfriend returned to my classroom, but, the directora said: "since now, Xiomy will on another side from classroom.
Well, I feel happy 'cause now I can help her.
At noon, I was playing soccer with Xiomy and the other girls and guys, When Xiomy fell and I went to saw that she was ok.
She was bleeding on her finger 'cause she cut en her finger, when I saw, I convert on vampira and I sucked her finger.
Now I gonna to do the homework and watch the soccer match.
Bye bye kisses.

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- January 23th
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문장 1
- Today is wednesday, January 23th.
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문장 2
- Today I went to school, Today had a good news, My girlfriend returned to my classroom, but, the directora said: "since now, Xiomy will on another side from classroom.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Well, I feel happy 'cause now I can help her.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- At noon, I was playing soccer with Xiomy and the other girls and guys, When Xiomy fell and I went to saw that she was ok.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- She was bleeding on her finger 'cause she cut en her finger, when I saw, I convert on vampira and I sucked her finger.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Now I gonna to do the homework and watch the soccer match.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- Bye bye kisses.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7