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Text from rong918 - English

  • Feel Lost

  • Recently one of my best friend decide leave Australia and go to Shanghai.
  • He told me he is going to meet a girl there.
  • As his good friend, of course, I hope he could find his true love there.
  • But in the other hand, I feel lost here.
  • After come to Australia for almost 6 years, I did not get PR, it means I have to pay a lot of money and time on visa, then I can stay here legally.
  • I was make some money, but for some not mistake not made by me, I lost a lot.
  • And now my friend decide leave here, I start feel maybe it is the time I should leave Australia and move on.
  • I love the environment of Australia, clean air and water, easy work, lower social press, and higher salary then other places.
  • But I do not just hold some short visa here, and no one I can talk to.
  • Feel lost now.....

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