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Hello everybody!
Hi friends!
I'm a Brazilian English teacher.
I'm here to trying to improve my skill in this language and to make friends all around the world.
I don't have much time but I'll try to be here everyday at least for a few minutes.
Hope you all can help me. See you.

CarolrockerJanuary 2013赶紧投票吧！
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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

标题
- Hello everybody!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi friends!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm a Brazilian English teacher.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I'm here to trying to improve my skill in this language and to make friends all around the world.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I don't have much time but I'll try to be here everyday at least for a few minutes.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Hope you all can help me. See you.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5