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Every morning Milton Petrie came out from his New York flat and bought a newspaper from a rugged old man on the street corner.
One morning old man wasn't appeared there.
Petrie found that he had been very sick and been in a hospital.
He immediately paid his bill and later when the old man died paid for his funeral.
Old man was one of many people whom Milton Petrie helped with his money.
Whenever he read from newspapers about personal disasters, Petrie sent generous cheques, especially to families of policemen and firemen , injured at work.
He also sent cheque to a mother who lost her five children in a fire , and to beautiful model whose face was cut in a knife attack.

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- Every morning Milton Petrie came out from his New York flat and bought a newspaper from a rugged old man on the street corner.
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- One morning old man wasn't appeared there.
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- Petrie found that he had been very sick and been in a hospital.
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- He immediately paid his bill and later when the old man died paid for his funeral.
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- Old man was one of many people whom Milton Petrie helped with his money.
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- Whenever he read from newspapers about personal disasters, Petrie sent generous cheques, especially to families of policemen and firemen , injured at work.
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- He also sent cheque to a mother who lost her five children in a fire , and to beautiful model whose face was cut in a knife attack.
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