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Almost a third of our lives sleeping happens.
But scientists have only in the last four decades of rigorous study and understanding and transparency have happened in sleep time.
According to the traditional view of modern sleep stage for recuperation and repair of tissues and cells is worn.
But now we know that when you wake the body is unable to repair itself.
In the past, people thought that sleep is a time of absolutely no activity for the body, the brain is active during sleep and can record the set of changes.

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- Almost a third of our lives sleeping happens.
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- But scientists have only in the last four decades of rigorous study and understanding and transparency have happened in sleep time.
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- According to the traditional view of modern sleep stage for recuperation and repair of tissues and cells is worn.
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- But now we know that when you wake the body is unable to repair itself.
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- In the past, people thought that sleep is a time of absolutely no activity for the body, the brain is active during sleep and can record the set of changes.
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