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從ZaraLoo來的文本 - English

  • Hy all.

  • My name is Zara.
  • I'm 30 years old.
  • I'm from Croatia .
  • My primary idea for visiting this site is for improving my english skills.
  • I'm looking for somebody who wants to talk with me and correct me when it's needed.
  • I want to improve my grammar and vocabulary. :)

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