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Check my sentence please!
Hi everybody!
My name is German, I'm 20 years old, I am from Kazakhstan, but now I live in Germany about 8 months.
Here I am studing German in Language school, and English myself at home.
I would want to improve my conversation skill in English.
I can speak Russian, and also can help to you with it.
Thank you for reading.

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- My name is German, I'm 20 years old, I am from Kazakhstan, but now I live in Germany about 8 months.
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- Here I am studing German in Language school, and English myself at home.
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- I would want to improve my conversation skill in English.
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