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  • This article is published by the Express newspaper, on March 6th.
  • Everybody knows the stun guns.
  • The first function of this pistol is to protect.
  • The principle of the stun guns is to send a discharge of 50 000 volts to the body of the person.
  • The stun guns used in England since 2004.The British police uses this pistol paralyzing as well on adults that children.
  • CRAE, Children Rights Alliance for England, pressed on the government and on other bodies having some power and uses the regional and international mechanisms of human rights for protects the human rights of children.
  • During this week, CRAE required that an investigation is made on the use of the stun guns on the children for London.
  • Figures reveal that between 2008 and 2012 the stun guns was more used by 131 livers on children.
  • These are frightening figures.
  • The effects of the pistol on the children are not known and are nevertheless used.
  • The only researches made on the effects of the stun guns concern the adults.
  • The physical and psychological effects of the stun guns on the children are not known and are nevertheless used.
  • According to figures it is in the districts of London that the stun guns is most used.
  • The CRAE’s Director declared: “Ultimately we'd like to see tasers banned.
  • The UN has been calling on us to ban their use on children for years and so that's what we would expect to see.” We notice that the children living in the same city have different processing according to the place where they live.
  • This difference cannot understand by social factors as the poverty, or the rate of criminality.
  • CREA’s director points out that “For example, 70 per cent of the occasions on which children in London were tasered by police occurred in just a quarter of London boroughs.” These figures show that the excessive use of stun guns on the children results from a local problem.
  • The problem comes certain British police headquarters which should question the method concerning the children.
  • In 2008 the UN Committee voiced concern used against children, including stun guns.
  • The Committee called on the UK to treat tasers as weapons subject to rules and restrictions.
  • In the next years the police will owe used another method with the children.

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    • The stun guns used in England since 2004.The British police uses this pistol paralyzing as well on adults that children.
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    • CRAE, Children Rights Alliance for England, pressed on the government and on other bodies having some power and uses the regional and international mechanisms of human rights for protects the human rights of children.
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    • During this week, CRAE required that an investigation is made on the use of the stun guns on the children for London.
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    • The physical and psychological effects of the stun guns on the children are not known and are nevertheless used.
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    • The UN has been calling on us to ban their use on children for years and so that's what we would expect to see.” We notice that the children living in the same city have different processing according to the place where they live.
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    • CREA’s director points out that “For example, 70 per cent of the occasions on which children in London were tasered by police occurred in just a quarter of London boroughs.” These figures show that the excessive use of stun guns on the children results from a local problem.
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    • The problem comes certain British police headquarters which should question the method concerning the children.
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