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I shall to write small summary for school
My favourite Hollywood film is Avatar of James Cameron.
This film was made at 2009 year of 20th Century Fox so scenario was wrote at the early 90th.
The film tell about ex-soldier James Sully who have to know how RDA-corporation can to extract the rare ant valuable mineral unobtainable.
Whole he do it he will meet tribe of na'vi and understand that he don't must to help RDA to destroy Omaticaya tribe.
Will he save Pandorra?

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- I shall to write small summary for school
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câu 1
- My favourite Hollywood film is Avatar of James Cameron.
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câu 2
- This film was made at 2009 year of 20th Century Fox so scenario was wrote at the early 90th.
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câu 3
- The film tell about ex-soldier James Sully who have to know how RDA-corporation can to extract the rare ant valuable mineral unobtainable.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- Whole he do it he will meet tribe of na'vi and understand that he don't must to help RDA to destroy Omaticaya tribe.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- Will he save Pandorra?
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