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  • Spring

  • Here the seasons don’t appear slowly, transforming into a pleasant atmosphere the cold of winter.
  • No, here they fall suddenly upon us, as unpredictable as a summer storm.
  • A few days ago we were still shivering with cold, and now we’ve already come back to the hot day, to the sandals and the short sleeves.
  • Spring has come, and with it all the pleasures it brings: the sunbeams that cover us with their heat; the singing of the birds in the wind that blows in the evenings; the smells, so special, that have the bright days; the sun that sets later every day; the walks in the park; the trees that wear flowers which perfume is almost as sweet as their colour; the smiles on the faces; and the energy that the sun offers us.
  • I love spring; it’s the season of hope.
  • The good days are finally born again, the light and the heat remind us of these sensations we had forgotten, and everything seems lighter.
  • This first week of spring made some ideas blossom in my head, some travelling projects (close or not, you’ll know it son ;)), experiences I want to live, wishes, desires, and, above all, the energy to believe in my dreams and the strength to make them come true.
  • May the sun shine for all of you!

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    • A few days ago we were still shivering with cold, and now we’ve already come back to the hot day, to the sandals and the short sleeves.
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    • Spring has come, and with it all the pleasures it brings: the sunbeams that cover us with their heat; the singing of the birds in the wind that blows in the evenings; the smells, so special, that have the bright days; the sun that sets later every day; the walks in the park; the trees that wear flowers which perfume is almost as sweet as their colour; the smiles on the faces; and the energy that the sun offers us.
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    • The good days are finally born again, the light and the heat remind us of these sensations we had forgotten, and everything seems lighter.
      투표하세요!
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    • This first week of spring made some ideas blossom in my head, some travelling projects (close or not, you’ll know it son ;)), experiences I want to live, wishes, desires, and, above all, the energy to believe in my dreams and the strength to make them come true.
      투표하세요!
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