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  • Hi evryone !

  • i'm really interested, motivated by some conversations french/english, in Paris or on Skype, because in two months, i'll leave Paris, and almost evrything by the way, to moove in Canada !
  • I'm a 30 years old french, and i can speak french with you, about what you want (not when you want but really often and a lot of time).
  • I'm working in advertising, i cook pretty good, i can tell you about some good places in Paris, just let me know, send me a message, and let's start !
  • see you, really soon i hope ! ;)

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    • i'm really interested, motivated by some conversations french/english, in Paris or on Skype, because in two months, i'll leave Paris, and almost evrything by the way, to moove in Canada !
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    • I'm a 30 years old french, and i can speak french with you, about what you want (not when you want but really often and a lot of time).
      투표하세요!
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    • I'm working in advertising, i cook pretty good, i can tell you about some good places in Paris, just let me know, send me a message, and let's start !
      투표하세요!
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