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FRESHMAN!
Hello everybody!
I'm really happy discovering this site!
Because one friend has told me about Polyglot.
And what is better than talk and meet new people? NOTHING!
I'm a Brazilian man, I've never been abroad, but I want to travel soon. Where? I don't know!
But I want and I will!
I love travelling, talking, meeting new people, having fun!
And I hope that you correct my text and send me a message!
Thanks for your attention! Bye!

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- FRESHMAN!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Hello everybody!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I'm really happy discovering this site!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Because one friend has told me about Polyglot.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- And what is better than talk and meet new people? NOTHING!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- I'm a Brazilian man, I've never been abroad, but I want to travel soon. Where? I don't know!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- But I want and I will!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- I love travelling, talking, meeting new people, having fun!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- And I hope that you correct my text and send me a message!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
문장 9
- Thanks for your attention! Bye!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9