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MY BEST FRIEND
Talking about best friend, I don't have one.
I believe that no one should be trusted because we live in an open world.
I have friends that are close to me and are always there for me but its harder to choose a best friend.
Having a best friend, you have to discuss every part of something that is concerned in your life.
I am a kind of secretive person who don't reveal my feelings out because no one can be trusted with a secret.

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- MY BEST FRIEND
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câu 1
- Talking about best friend, I don't have one.
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câu 2
- I believe that no one should be trusted because we live in an open world.
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câu 3
- I have friends that are close to me and are always there for me but its harder to choose a best friend.
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câu 4
- Having a best friend, you have to discuss every part of something that is concerned in your life.
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câu 5
- I am a kind of secretive person who don't reveal my feelings out because no one can be trusted with a secret.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5