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March 13
Hello, everyone!
Today's a particular hot day.
The internet linemen's van is parked outside.
They have been there for half an hour now.
I don't know what they're doing or waiting for to happen.
Maybe they're checking how long a wire they're gonna need, but one thing's for sure, I'm gonna have a reliable internet connection before the day ends.
You see, I'm only using an internet stick which I load daily with 50 pesos.
There are times when the internet would just be cut off or the connection will be as slow as the ripening of the santol fruits in our front yard.
Oh, wait, here they come.

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- March 13
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- Hello, everyone!
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- Today's a particular hot day.
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- The internet linemen's van is parked outside.
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- They have been there for half an hour now.
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- I don't know what they're doing or waiting for to happen.
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- Maybe they're checking how long a wire they're gonna need, but one thing's for sure, I'm gonna have a reliable internet connection before the day ends.
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- You see, I'm only using an internet stick which I load daily with 50 pesos.
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Sentence 8
- There are times when the internet would just be cut off or the connection will be as slow as the ripening of the santol fruits in our front yard.
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- Oh, wait, here they come.
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