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Could you correct my email please ? ;-) (and to improve it)
Dear Sir, Thank you for your help .
I would be happy to work on MTR line if you win the project.
And if by chance any other position was to become available , I would be grateful if you would let me know. Best regards

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- Could you correct my email please ? ;-) (and to improve it)
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Dear Sir, Thank you for your help .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I would be happy to work on MTR line if you win the project.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- And if by chance any other position was to become available , I would be grateful if you would let me know. Best regards
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3