Correccións

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!Non corrixido

Text from Davide23888 - English

  • True story

  • A couple of years ago, i went with my friends Alessio Michael and Michele to snowboarding at Bardonecchia.
  • The first thing you have to do when you visit a new mountain is get to the top, and we have done.
  • Then we started to descend mountain avoiding ski-run, we go on the rocks, in to the forest then below the cable way, until, at certain point, the snow on the grow was over, there were only earth and grass.
  • So we started to walking with a board in our hand and we're back in the forest searching where was the ski-run.
  • After a few minutes we can saw a ski-run, and we started to walking in that direction until we arrived to a drop about 2 meters and the only way to pass this obstacle was jump down.
  • I jumped down, then Michael and while Alessio was going to jump, Michele have a brilliant idea!
  • He put his board under his ass like a bob (sled) and lunched himself for jump a drop in that way, but, obviusly, it was a bad idea, he lost control and collided with Alessio.
  • Both fall down on a tree and were hanging for a few second after falling toghether embraced.
  • This was the best funny things wich i have ever saw in my life!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Título
  • Frase 1
  • Frase 2
  • Frase 3
    • Then we started to descend mountain avoiding ski-run, we go on the rocks, in to the forest then below the cable way, until, at certain point, the snow on the grow was over, there were only earth and grass.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 3
  • Frase 4
  • Frase 5
    • After a few minutes we can saw a ski-run, and we started to walking in that direction until we arrived to a drop about 2 meters and the only way to pass this obstacle was jump down.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 5
  • Frase 6
  • Frase 7
    • He put his board under his ass like a bob (sled) and lunched himself for jump a drop in that way, but, obviusly, it was a bad idea, he lost control and collided with Alessio.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Frase 7
  • Frase 8
  • Frase 9