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Whats up guys?
Hey whats up guys :) I wanted to improve my english, therefore I join your community!
In 4 weeks I'm gonna go to Florida for flight training.
I hope to improve my english to the highest level possible for a non-native speaker. Well..
I am new here and I try to find out what would probably be the most effective way in order to gain my skills :) xoxo from Frankfurt!

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문장 1
- Hey whats up guys :) I wanted to improve my english, therefore I join your community!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- In 4 weeks I'm gonna go to Florida for flight training.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- I hope to improve my english to the highest level possible for a non-native speaker. Well..
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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- I am new here and I try to find out what would probably be the most effective way in order to gain my skills :) xoxo from Frankfurt!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4