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  • Is technology a good or bad thing?

  • It seems to me that techonology has advantages and disadvantages.
  • For example, you can find out information which help you for your work or your studies, read the news around the world freely, and also keep in touch with other persons easily like your family, old friends and colleagues.
  • Another advantage to me is that I don´t need to go to the bank or service companies to pay my bills.
  • That's essential because of the terrible traffic in my city.
  • The problem is on internet there are several technology criminals who try to steal your personal information.
  • Most children are exposed to danger, as well.
  • So, depend of their parents to take care of them.

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