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When I was a teenager I went camping with my friends in Marcahuasi (Lima) for the first time.
They used to go camping twice a year but I've never been there so I felt nervous the first time.
To reach the mountain's hilltop we went hiking around three hours.
The weather wasn't very well for me because there was very little oxygen, also the way was really difficult to walk.
However, suddenly I had enough force to continue but inmediately it started to rain a lot... bad luck!.
Finally, I arrived at top but I fell asleep why I was too tired while my friends were enjoying in a great party.

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- When I was a teenager I went camping with my friends in Marcahuasi (Lima) for the first time.
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- They used to go camping twice a year but I've never been there so I felt nervous the first time.
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- To reach the mountain's hilltop we went hiking around three hours.
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- The weather wasn't very well for me because there was very little oxygen, also the way was really difficult to walk.
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- However, suddenly I had enough force to continue but inmediately it started to rain a lot... bad luck!.
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- Finally, I arrived at top but I fell asleep why I was too tired while my friends were enjoying in a great party.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6