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  • The Dangers of Cramming

  • The article The Dangers of Cramming refers to the problem of students who tend to do more harm than good by depriving themselves of sleep before taking big exams .
  • The author claims that lack of sleep may result in the intellectual lapses leading to concentration loss.
  • What is more, Buchholtz underlines that the range of sleeping time is different for each person.
  • The true danger Buchholtz ascribes to stimulants like caffeine or amphetamine which temporarily keep students awake but after they stop working they cause sleep incapability or even hallucinations.
  • The author states that further recovery and restoration of proper sleep time may last up to two days.
  • Another factor having impact on the quality of sleep is stress.
  • Buchholtz advices how to minimize its’ side effects by making relaxing exercises.
  • Occurrence of sleep overdose after such damaging time should not worry as the brain needs time to recover.
  • At the end of the article we find suggestion that all students should do for the future is to make any changes carefully.

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    • The article The Dangers of Cramming refers to the problem of students who tend to do more harm than good by depriving themselves of sleep before taking big exams .
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    • The true danger Buchholtz ascribes to stimulants like caffeine or amphetamine which temporarily keep students awake but after they stop working they cause sleep incapability or even hallucinations.
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    • At the end of the article we find suggestion that all students should do for the future is to make any changes carefully.
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