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  • Hello

  • Hello.
  • My name is Alexandra.
  • I'm nineteen years old.
  • I was born in twenty four, December in nineteen ninety four.
  • I live in France, my village it's small.
  • But I want to live in Pris because i love this city. I'm student.
  • I want to work in a pet shop because I love animals.
  • I want to approve my English so please help me. Bye bye :)

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