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Text from kovaleva_lena - English

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Hello everyone.
I m realy affraid to do mistakes in my letter and in my speech so i cant start to speak with foreigner.
Today is first time when im here.
Please correct this sentenses and after that i ll continie to write) thanks

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Sentence 1
- Hello everyone.
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Sentence 2
- I m realy affraid to do mistakes in my letter and in my speech so i cant start to speak with foreigner.
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- Today is first time when im here.
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- Please correct this sentenses and after that i ll continie to write) thanks
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