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USA! What else ?
Hello again.
It´s time for a new Topic.
Last night i finished a book complete in english.
Well i would say not the baddest Performance for such an old guy like i.
Ok, the most teacher( or should i say members ?) will Show me how ridiculos weak the steps of Forward i have done.
Always the same mistakes in grammar time and sentence construction.
But it´s very interesting to read the correction and of course the comment.I hope you never lost your Patience.
Beforehand thank you for your Support.

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- USA! What else ?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Hello again.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- It´s time for a new Topic.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Last night i finished a book complete in english.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Well i would say not the baddest Performance for such an old guy like i.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- Ok, the most teacher( or should i say members ?) will Show me how ridiculos weak the steps of Forward i have done.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Always the same mistakes in grammar time and sentence construction.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- But it´s very interesting to read the correction and of course the comment.I hope you never lost your Patience.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- Beforehand thank you for your Support.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8