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Text from Raffy_Patel - English

  • March 21a

  • Good morning, guys!
  • I'll describe what can be seen on our dining table at this moment.
  • As it is breakfast, there's a loaf of bread, three fried eggs, some Korean (at least according to the meat shop) barbecue, and a pot of rice.
  • My mom and my nephew will surely be having barbecue, eggs and rice.
  • Instead of rice, I eat bread for breakfast.
  • I have this crazy idea that rice gets your tummy bloated so I've been trying to lessen my rice consumption lately.
  • My dad, however, takes a bowl of oatmeal with any protein every morning.
  • He has tried every flavor of oatmeal that is available in the market.
  • I rarely see him and mom have coffee at breakfast.
  • They usually wake up at 2 a.m. and have their first coffee of the day with bread or biscuit.
  • I need to wake up my nephew now.
  • He's gonna be late for his recollection. Bye, guys!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English