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Mont Rose Project
Which sentence is better in your opinion ?
It might be some puns in there sentences, the "mont rose" is a summit.
If you have any idea to make a better one, please let me know !
Here are my ideas : Help up by supporting your project to the top !
An simple gesture to help us reaching the summit !
Thanks you very much every body !

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- Mont Rose Project
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- Which sentence is better in your opinion ?
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Sentence 2
- It might be some puns in there sentences, the "mont rose" is a summit.
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Sentence 3
- If you have any idea to make a better one, please let me know !
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- Here are my ideas : Help up by supporting your project to the top !
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- An simple gesture to help us reaching the summit !
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- Thanks you very much every body !
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