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help Hi every body, today I will introduce with you about topic “tourist destination“ . accodring to me, my Earth is a heaven with the beautiful places.

I have been growing but I just have come a few place of my city, example “Con mountain White Kiep ”, “ Thay pagoda”, “Cao pagoda”.

Outside , I always wish to visiting Thuong Hai habor.

At there, includes dozens of historic buildings, located along the Huangpu River,-background of the film that I have seen and I always image there í a day I’m at there to enjoy them direction by my eyes.

Near Thuong Hai is Hong Kong and Dai Loan.

I want to go to the Hong kong to see house with pool and garden roses like what I see in movies “the girl Shanghai”.

Taiwanese also known for building high-end casinos in existence long. and I also know that there are places even more black social organizations. you know why I say this not because I was a part anthology film fans by Andy Lau.

if I have to condition come to there certain that I would buy 10 a Shanghai-style dress to make gift for my the mother, the sister of my cousin's house.

Besides I also like to visiting japanese to go sightseeing with “ Cherry blossoms”.

When I was a child I used the toys made in Japanese, as robots ,motorbike, bike, pedicabs, toy model trains, toy plane remote control,.., of course, I’m a boy. re talking about the country where I live-Vietnam.

I think Nha Trang is the most appropriate place for me and my family can enjoy the scenic conditions of the Southern Ocean.

I think Nha Trang is an ideal destination not only because there is a place to relax with my family after months of studying hard day.

But as far as I know the quality of service there is also very good. also on trade issues, I think, Vietnam is one of the most significant places in the world and I always look forward foreign tourists will come to Vietnam as well as many people in Vietnam travel destinations in the world so famous. but now I want to hear other opinions!