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The lonely beauty of the sea's coast
Hello!
My name's Natalie.
I live in Odessa city.
Could you help me with my English, please?
It's my first attempt to write such a letter in this website, so excuse me for my mistakes) It's almost April and I love this time of year most.
I live near the coast of the Black Sea.
It's very amazing to come here, listen how the waves sound and forget all the problems that bother you.
But when it's summer, you are not able to enjoy this lonely beauty of the nature anymore.
There're many people on the beach, music plays loudly, it's very funny.
And actually you start missing the quiet peaceful spring.

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- The lonely beauty of the sea's coast
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- Hello!
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- My name's Natalie.
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- I live in Odessa city.
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- Could you help me with my English, please?
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- It's my first attempt to write such a letter in this website, so excuse me for my mistakes) It's almost April and I love this time of year most.
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- I live near the coast of the Black Sea.
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- It's very amazing to come here, listen how the waves sound and forget all the problems that bother you.
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- But when it's summer, you are not able to enjoy this lonely beauty of the nature anymore.
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- There're many people on the beach, music plays loudly, it's very funny.
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- And actually you start missing the quiet peaceful spring.
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