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Hi! I'm Italian girl
Hi..
My name's Greta.
I'm 16 years old.
I'm from Savona, in Italy.
I'm not good speak english ahah It's four past nine.
Tomorrow I've to verify of english.
It's very simple, but I'm worried.
This verify is on time, present simple and present continuos.
Anyway, I love comics!
My favourite manga are Death Note, Mirai Nikki, Another and Kuroshitsuji.
I'm a bit an hikikomori.
Oh, I love Pewdiepie!
He's fantastic!
...Finish ahah, help me to improve, thank you very much.
Sorry for my english.
If you want to talk : polharoiid@outlook.it Byee

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