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My day
Hello!
Today was a hard day for me.
I worked so much.
Now I feelling tired.
But I must to be strong!
I have a traning this evening.
And I want to make a dinner.
I believe, when I leave my office, I'll be feel myself better.

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- My day
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句子 1
- Hello!
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句子 2
- Today was a hard day for me.
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句子 3
- I worked so much.
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- Now I feelling tired.
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句子 5
- But I must to be strong!
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句子 6
- I have a traning this evening.
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句子 7
- And I want to make a dinner.
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句子 8
- I believe, when I leave my office, I'll be feel myself better.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8