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Newton's eye summary
Robert Hooke was working on his office when his maid entered in the room.
She warned him that an important man called Newton was here to see him.
Newton's rude behavior has already started: he entered in the house despite his lack of authorization from Hooke.
He then started to yell, before trying to prove his theory by putting a needle into his own eye.
He only stopped when Hooke admit that he "believe" him, even though he certainly only said that to keep Newton from hurting himself.
Newton finally left, with a final critic about Hooke's drawing room

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- Robert Hooke was working on his office when his maid entered in the room.
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Sentence 2
- She warned him that an important man called Newton was here to see him.
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Sentence 3
- Newton's rude behavior has already started: he entered in the house despite his lack of authorization from Hooke.
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- He then started to yell, before trying to prove his theory by putting a needle into his own eye.
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- He only stopped when Hooke admit that he "believe" him, even though he certainly only said that to keep Newton from hurting himself.
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- Newton finally left, with a final critic about Hooke's drawing room
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