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A DAY MORE
HELLO.
I´M SITTING IN MY OFFICE AND I´M THINKING ABOUT WHAT IS DIFFICULT TO LEARN NEW LANGUAGES.
TODAY IS MORE EASY LEARN ENGLISH BECAUSE WE HAVE MANY MEANS CLOSE AT HAND TO DO IT.
THE DIFFICULT IS HAVING TIME TO LEARN ENGLISH.
FOR ONE SIDE IS THE WORK, FOR OTHER ONE IS THE FAMILY .
AND WHEN WE HAVE A LITTLE FREE TIME WE WANT TO USE IT TO REST.
BUT I´M GOING TO TRYING TO ROB A LITTLE OF FREE TIME TO LEARN ENGLISH. BYE.

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- A DAY MORE
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- HELLO.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I´M SITTING IN MY OFFICE AND I´M THINKING ABOUT WHAT IS DIFFICULT TO LEARN NEW LANGUAGES.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- TODAY IS MORE EASY LEARN ENGLISH BECAUSE WE HAVE MANY MEANS CLOSE AT HAND TO DO IT.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- THE DIFFICULT IS HAVING TIME TO LEARN ENGLISH.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- FOR ONE SIDE IS THE WORK, FOR OTHER ONE IS THE FAMILY .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- AND WHEN WE HAVE A LITTLE FREE TIME WE WANT TO USE IT TO REST.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- BUT I´M GOING TO TRYING TO ROB A LITTLE OF FREE TIME TO LEARN ENGLISH. BYE.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7