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Last ear i flied abroad - in Egypt.
It was my first experience.I like to swim, to sunbathe, to dive.There are i met a lot of people and knew many sights.

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- It was my first experience.I like to swim, to sunbathe, to dive.There are i met a lot of people and knew many sights.
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