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Hi, I need practice the English, in this moment I want writer about my family.
They are three mens very beautifull, the firts is a teenager athlete, he is swimmer and practice every days.
The second is a little men, he is a student very intelligent and have good memory, he also is swimmer, but he is begun in this sport.
And my husband, he is big man, he is tall ande very loving.
I love very muchc.
Ok, this is all for now.
After will write more. Thanks you.

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- Hi, I need practice the English, in this moment I want writer about my family.
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- They are three mens very beautifull, the firts is a teenager athlete, he is swimmer and practice every days.
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- The second is a little men, he is a student very intelligent and have good memory, he also is swimmer, but he is begun in this sport.
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- And my husband, he is big man, he is tall ande very loving.
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- I love very muchc.
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- Ok, this is all for now.
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- After will write more. Thanks you.
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